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    dots Submission Name: Karma Chaoticdots
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    Author: Draigon
    ASL Info:    25/m/Al
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 164/196/91
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Misc/Political
    Total Views: 677
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    Bytes: 1005



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    dotsKarma Chaoticdots
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    Insignias are branded upon the wall,
    the very substance of our soul.
    Madness and suicidal tendencies
    plague the mind to no end.

    The wrath of karma consumes,
    and drives these thoughts.
    Oh the horrible ideals
    that come to mind.

    Punishment for our greed,
    and of the false creed
    that we follow
    through the blood and sorrow.

    Gluttony is deadly,
    deadly as cancer.
    Evil can not survive,
    but even the good perish.

    Fairness is nonexistent,
    but who's to blame?
    Humanity is the blame.

    Nothing is left,
    all the pious knights have gone,
    faded into fabled history.
    Valient warriors are no more.

    Doom is upon us
    and will devour everything.
    Nothing stands between us,
    except for the gates of Hell.

    Welcome to the man-made calamity,
    and eternal persecution.




    Submitted on 2010-08-03 20:25:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      er ... It makes me think about how we are responsible for providing all of the human values that exist at all, since Nature provides only the problems and not the solutions; only the brain, but not the thoughts! Only the heart, but not judgement of what feelings to be governed by.

    I so like the rich, strong language which you use, but still outline an intelligible argument about problems I have too!
    | Posted on 2010-08-10 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmm, misanthropy... but does it have a philanthropic root in your heart? Do you have disdain for humanity because you love it really, or do you just hate humanity period?

    Is nobility something that you truly believe that man ever maintained as a matter of practice in some era of time, or do you really think that man's "time of chivalry" was merely a time of greater want for chivalry so that it was maintained more in the poetry of the era of which knights and castles were part?
    | Posted on 2010-08-05 00:00:00 | by alittlebithippy | [ Reply to This ]


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