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Author:	LaughingGuest
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Words:	85

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Desert of Despair dots

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So you're "Peligro?"
Everything dies
don't you know?
All life is a lie
just like the ego.

So you're "Peligro?"
into desert it all goes.
Fed to the horse;
the enemys corpse.
We thought you should know..

So you're "Peligro?"
with candles, into the cemetery,
burning on the headstone.
Pigs blood splashed wearily
suddenly all alone.

A beast sleeping quick
being poked with a stick.
Awakened and irked;
shredding in one big jerk
claws rained from the sky
tearing everything from life.

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