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Righteous Beginnings

Author: Cayman
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Righteous Beginnings

One's character is tested on an ongoing basis
Friends turn to strangers and strangers to friends
What has ended, ends in life’s lessons we must not forget
What has begun, begins with virtuous intentions with no regret

These are humble, righteous beginnings that will dictate our lives
Father time ages with grace, wrinkles will develop in our face
But the spirit and the heart stays young, like life has just begun
So let’s wither away together, clasped hand in hand on a hospital bed

You see, I’d rather die with you than live without you
That’s when one realizes it’s a righteous beginning
I love you

Submitted on 2010-08-05 14:14:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Great poem, it's full of wisdom and love. The title is well suited for your message.

Love of Christ,
| Posted on 2010-08-05 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]

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