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    dots Submission Name: Righteous Beginningsdots
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    Author: Cayman
    ASL Info:    31
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 182/168/72
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsRighteous Beginningsdots
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    One's character is tested on an ongoing basis
    Friends turn to strangers and strangers to friends
    What has ended, ends in life’s lessons we must not forget
    What has begun, begins with virtuous intentions with no regret

    These are humble, righteous beginnings that will dictate our lives
    Father time ages with grace, wrinkles will develop in our face
    But the spirit and the heart stays young, like life has just begun
    So let’s wither away together, clasped hand in hand on a hospital bed

    You see, I’d rather die with you than live without you
    That’s when one realizes it’s a righteous beginning
    I love you




    Submitted on 2010-08-05 14:14:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great poem, it's full of wisdom and love. The title is well suited for your message.

    Love of Christ,
    Christie
    | Posted on 2010-08-05 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]


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