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    dots Submission Name: The Quest to Cantelbarrydots
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    Author: Cayman
    ASL Info:    31
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 182/168/72
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 382
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 502



    Description:
       Wouldn't it be great if we all had a, "Cantelbarry" in our lives?


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    dotsThe Quest to Cantelbarrydots
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    Good day my lady, what a wonderful sight
    Such sweet and quaint matters assist us with the plight

    Quiet footsteps to one’s door is surely not scary
    Brave intentions promote the quest to Cantelbarry

    Oh Cantelbarry, such a quest is needed so much
    One push makes me mush, quiver with the slightest touch

    Evening falling, our souls are calling like a tooth to a fairy
    To find a way and make me stay with my sweet Cantelbarry




    Submitted on 2010-08-05 15:48:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i love the rhythm.. great.
    | Posted on 2010-08-11 00:00:00 | by rsujith | [ Reply to This ]
      I love it. The rhythm was good and the lightheartedness of the poem makes me smile.

    Cheers,
    HS
    | Posted on 2010-08-05 00:00:00 | by Hazy skies | [ Reply to This ]


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