"to bury the weight
of a heart too heavy
to hold and keep
Love"
This reminds me of those lone walks that you sometimes need to simply clear your head. Especially when you permit yourself to get close to someone and it's at least seemingly not working out at the moment. Though I reached two interpretations of this 1) that the person feels as though they cannot leave the the other because they carry to much baggage maybe? 2) to you've simply been hurt to much to try or your feelings have built up because their not accepted....
Am I anywhere close?
"that act as aisles
to direct the course
of your river that was
Lost"
I really dont understand this part of the stanza. However I do love the reference to a mirror before hand :]
The separation of the the words at the end of each stanza causes you to focus on the words and really try to take away their meaning. It flows pretty well and the sentence break is done flawlessly.
Submission Name: The Waterfall
