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    Author: angela~
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Those who can only
    give love
    in monetary measures
    are doomed.
    Limited to
    how much love they
    can give
    based on what they earn.

    Those who can only
    give love
    from the heart
    have untold
    wealth
    although owning nothing
    but their own soul.




    Submitted on 2004-07-26 10:02:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That's what I've been saying all along to these girls I know. But they seem to think that the more money you have the more you'll love them...ps[censored]. I liked this poem it's message was clear and precise. The Message itself seemed to stand out twenty times more than the poem itself and that's a good thing. Personally I know moneys a good thing and I earn enough to get me through the years but IT ISN'T everything, my brother and I both agree that doing things for money is doing the wrong thing...especially love.. that's why we have a saying
    one love
    one family
    thanks for the poem.
    | Posted on 2004-07-28 00:00:00 | by SKillz_Heckle | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this (or still love this I should say). Its so true. You should get this embrodered (sp?) as like a saying on to like some towels or something and sell them. I agree with the subject too if you remember "Beggarman on the Corner" song. But indeed, I wish that more people were more giving and less into helping only themselves. Help Aqualung!
    ~Aaron
    | Posted on 2004-07-28 00:00:00 | by MusingMinstrel | [ Reply to This ]
      i have read this before, and i love the message in it. seems these days everything's about money. if one can give truly from the heart and soul are truly blessed. love is free. hugs are free... there is a quote from the bible: you cannot serve both god and money. even if you aren't religious, serving the almighty dollar is not the way to live with any kind of peace. well done, angela! i hope you are doing okay. i've been thinking about you a lot.
    | Posted on 2004-07-26 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      This is lovely, and I think it amplifies the bible story of the poor woman who gave less money than anyone else, yet Jesus said she had given more than all the rest put together, because she gave from her poverty, whereas the rest gave out of their surplus. But you could either expand this, or go on to another project, and write of the heart wrenching pain of those who can't give either. Who are unable to open up and share their love, give their time, or are affraid to. I hadn't seen this before either.
    Dave
    | Posted on 2004-07-26 00:00:00 | by Sandburg | [ Reply to This ]
      Very original. New idea expressed in it. I really liked it, i think you worked your words well. def added to one of my favs!
    | Posted on 2004-07-26 00:00:00 | by Ang | [ Reply to This ]
      My favourite part is

    how much love they
    can give
    based on what they earn.

    That's true of many people, I think. Sure, they make a lot, but they're never really happy, while the little people are as happy as can be without all the useless belongings.

    Good poem.
    | Posted on 2004-07-26 00:00:00 | by Shuurinakisame | [ Reply to This ]
      i really enjoyed it and i think that it had a very good point in it. i belive the same thing about love as well. it is a hard thing love. very good keep it up lia
    | Posted on 2004-07-26 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]


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