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Author:	Eunaphine
Elite Ratio:	1.62 - 0/0/1
Words:	52

Class/Type:	Joke/Serious
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Outcast

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The muscular figure, hunched into a feral crouch, may appear at first daunting. The loose, thick mane of the deepest crimson hangs about a wolven face. But then, grin. She stands, strong and well balanced, oozing and air of the utmost confidence....

It wasn't always like this.

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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It means a lot to them, as it does to you.