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    dots Submission Name: Country Roadsdots
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    Author: Childe-Wrote
    Elite Ratio:    1.78 - 17/53/44
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Misc/Nature
    Total Views: 431
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 1182



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    dotsCountry Roadsdots
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    He walks down that country road
    As if following his own ethical code

    For him it's the same old
    No direction in sight
    Despite the spite

    Those worn out cowboy boots
    Going back to his very roots

    In those hard-workin hands
    They tell how he takes care of the land

    And those blistered covered feet
    Can feel the heat and the wheat

    As that young lad
    Carries himself onward
    Down that dirt covered road

    It could be that straw hat
    Or his homeland as a tat

    That makes those blue eyes
    Show us the wise or the skies
    As he carries himself under the sun

    Within such pride and respect
    He's barely even a wreck

    Another blue moon away
    He's not far from becoming a man

    And down those country roads
    At dawn to dusk, laborious tasks

    He's making it on his own
    When he's not a king with a throne

    And somewhere up that road
    A momma misses her boy
    Like that child playing that old toy




    Submitted on 2010-08-07 16:44:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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