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    dots Submission Name: Sonnet - Soldiers & Strifedots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 75/194/254
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsSonnet - Soldiers & Strifedots
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    Another day has passed me by; I sigh
    All forms of silence can't drown... -- eyes still see.
    Who -- How? No way I can identify-
    They died, quivering lips never to be.

    Soaking my mind -- expensive wine tonight.
    Winter white; Sands burning -- Wishing escape.
    I shiver again --- Kalashnikov blight...
    Nothing is ever as it seems - red tape.

    Who knows if justice is really justice,
    Someone to see; unite the fallen stones.
    Perhaps another great one --- Augustus.
    Conquest, the walking on innocent bones.

    A journey to just come home, so much strife.
    Another year has passed; a soldiers life.






    Submitted on 2010-08-07 20:29:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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