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    dots Submission Name: a dayze 2 love JoYdots

    Author: gopher23
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    Words: 20
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    dotsa dayze 2 love JoYdots

    Ok I'll be brief
    I am nota thief
    but I wuvvl 2 hear music on my boom box
    sweet kitty

    Submitted on 2010-08-09 00:51:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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