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Our Love, My Dear

Author: Marbles
ASL Info:    24/M/IN
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Words: 168
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Our Love, My Dear

It can never be, my dear
Even if it was meant to be, my dear
No matter what we try, my dear
It will never end right, my dear

We have tried and tried again, my dear
We did everything we can, my dear
It simply can never be, my dear

Now as I take my life, my dear
Know that I will always love you, my dear
Everything about you astounds me, my dear
But it can never be, my dear

I hold you close to my heart, my dear
Your beauty always in my mind, my dear
And our love always in my heart, my dear
But it can simply never be, my dear

As you watch, my dear
Notice my heart stop beating, my dear
May our love die with it, my dear
And know that it is for the best, my dear
That our love could never be, my dear
And let it pass away with my life, my dear

Submitted on 2010-08-11 02:39:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i loved it...i read it not including the redundant words my's sweet but it pains really love that person but there is no chance for you..."It simply can never be,But it can never be,But it can simply never be"..those end parts of some lines struck me...i wish you only added the words my dear as the emphasis pf your poem, but it's your work and i respect just reminded me of my former love, we can never matter how hard i fought for it for many years... :(
| Posted on 2010-08-11 00:00:00 | by charity1991 | [ Reply to This ]

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