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Author: rsujith
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In wake of my recent success for a post grad university.. :)


Hardwork does pay.
All ye who say nay
Better keep away
‘cause I just proved it my way!

All those nay-sayers
And life’s cynical buggers
Who believe in luck,
More than in work-
Of their vices, Beware!
Once trapped in their lair,
All hope turns to despair!

‘N trust me, nothing sticks to your sweat,
As does lady luck and her success sweet!!!

Submitted on 2010-08-11 10:19:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  one's perseverance and hardwork does pay off and though "lady luck" may be on one's side it is ultimately our actions that lead us to where we are or will be.

congratulations btw!

| Posted on 2011-09-05 00:00:00 | by moonlitsky | [ Reply to This ]
  Hardwork is the key to success is a very old adage. You and your poem affirms it. Good work.
| Posted on 2010-08-14 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
  Perserverance is a must in the consistant plight of gaining a higher education, which is linked to higher self worth and, most importantly, being able to afford a Beamer instead of a Sonata.
| Posted on 2010-08-12 00:00:00 | by Cayman | [ Reply to This ]
  Excellent! A sagacious philosopher once observed"success favors the prepared mind, and good luck and good fortune are often preceeded by hard work".

Congratulations on both your achievements and your delightful poem!
| Posted on 2010-08-11 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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