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    dots Submission Name: black and blue, blue and blackdots
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    Author: PoeticNonsense
    ASL Info:    20/f/around
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 205/215/100
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    How do you find your way home when
    the stars won’t Stay still? Check your
    charts and keep looking up It’s bound to
    work. Sooner or Later. My mind is pacing
    in my skull treading The same old floorboards
    trying to knock New meaning into old words.
    Life stopped Making sense when I threw the
    compass To the wind and watched it fall
    to Earth and shatter. We’re waiting for The
    stars to rain on our parade but it seems They
    lied to us again. Doomsday is not yet here.




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