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black and blue, blue and black

Author: PoeticNonsense
ASL Info:    20/f/around
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Words: 106
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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black and blue, blue and black

How do you find your way home when
the stars won’t Stay still? Check your
charts and keep looking up It’s bound to
work. Sooner or Later. My mind is pacing
in my skull treading The same old floorboards
trying to knock New meaning into old words.
Life stopped Making sense when I threw the
compass To the wind and watched it fall
to Earth and shatter. We’re waiting for The
stars to rain on our parade but it seems They
lied to us again. Doomsday is not yet here.

Submitted on 2010-08-13 02:01:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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