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    dots Submission Name: TFgiftdots
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    Author: gopher23
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    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsTFgiftdots
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    sunglasses at nite
    will bring those thoughts of amber leigh
    out way there
    isnt it It
    when it all fits
    Ok for Saturdaze




    Submitted on 2010-08-13 16:33:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      short, and interesting, i like it
    | Posted on 2010-08-16 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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