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    dots Submission Name: My Inner Thoughtsdots

    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsMy Inner Thoughtsdots

    Empty spaces in my mind
    Fill with the painful memory
    Of the person I am now
    Compared to who I used to be

    Lost & confused
    When I was once so sure
    Life throws it's stones
    & I'm not sure how much more I can endure

    My love for you is strong
    But the love for me has grown weak
    Once bold & outgoing
    Now too shy to speak

    Locked in my prison of self-hate
    With no freedom in sight
    Trapped in my inner darkness
    & no one can even lend me a light

    Never good enough
    Every move I make is useless
    & I'm too chicken shit
    To even give you a hint, to notice

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      Don't feel alone, there are many out there that feel
    darkness in their lives right now. Don't lose hope, we all something holding us down. The key is pray our way out of it. If you wish I'll pray for you. I don't know if you believe in God or not. I'm not one to push my beliefs on anyone, I just write poetry about it.

    Love of Christ,
    | Posted on 2010-08-15 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]

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