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    dots Submission Name: Jagged liesdots
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    Author: dikkiwildest
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 17
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsJagged liesdots
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    Jagged lies
    I despise
    hurt me kindly
    I'll hurt you blindly
    I know where you live




    Submitted on 2010-08-13 23:34:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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