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    dots Submission Name: A Slut Calling Out A Whoredots
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    Author: DearlyDeparted
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       i was just really sick of listen to this so called player run his mouth about some of the women hes slept with...


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    dotsA Slut Calling Out A Whoredots
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    I've never understood how men can sit around and talk smack about women being whores.
    When half of them are in bed with different girls each week.
    Reminds me of the old saying...
    "the pot calling the kettle black."
    Well this is my call out.
    Fuck all you so called "g" status hypocritical sons of bitches.
    I never again want to hear the word "skank", "hoe", or "whore" coming out of your mouths.
    Because most of you don't have any right slinging the word around like you know what your talking about.
    And I know it plays into double standards.
    Though I've never played nice with that type of shit.
    Screw me being a slut because I fucked more bitches than you have.
    When in reality you most likely more of a fucking skank ass hoe than I am.
    What gives any man the right to call any girl a whore when most men have slept with more girls that most women have men.
    I'm just so fed up with the bull shit men put out.
    Who are any of you to judge?
    Do you have any idea the type of shit that flies through a womens head when a man calls her a harlot because shes slept with more men then the thought requirement?
    And on that note who are any of us to set the standard of how many people it takes to make you permiscuious ?
    I shall end with this...
    we never ask to be judged.....




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      Absolutely powerful.I feel like men call them wrong women out of their names.Like the one who is strong and determined more so than the one who gets around the block.I deeply understand this bc I'm the type of person as a young man who is promiscuious in the presence of different women.I don't feel like the women who slob and sleep around are the [censored]es, hoes, sluts and harlots.I believe it's the women who risk and gamble for riches and revel in breaking a guys heart.Men do the same thing.You pointed an issue among women that is'nt among all cultures, let alone cultures in this country.It kinda makes me think about young women kidnapped, then
    trained and put in the ring of marketed prostitution.I tell myself at times: "Just because that chic is dressing like this and dressing like that.This way in the club that way at the bar does'nt mean that she does'nt have a soul.I truly believe men don't look at it this way." I love your piece.Mainly bc I was brought up to love, cherish, understand and honor women.So that's why I find this so powerful.
    Peace and Inspiration

    RG
    | Posted on 2010-09-05 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]
      Dam! this is stright to the point very angery I can see and understandably I completely agree with everything you have said and it makes me just as sick to hear men say these things about us when in all reality they sleep with more women than we do men. But you know what its a double standard as you mentioned but also a tactic I think men know how to press our buttons especially the younger they are the more they feel they need to brag! its a shame I'm the only to comment on this post thus far but I am more than happy to do so. Hang in there I hope things get better for you

    Jackz

    [censored] all you so called "g" status hypocritical sons of [censored]es.

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    | Posted on 2010-08-19 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]


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