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    dots Submission Name: Prelude: Medean Lullabyedots

    Author: Shadowstar13
    Elite Ratio:    4.73 - 191/191/129
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsPrelude: Medean Lullabyedots

    Crushing MY soul won't do a damn thing to get you out of the mess you bring-
    beating ME down will not save you, so shoot your ailing self-esteem in the head
    it's not partial suicide, call it a mercy killing instead
    euthanasia's my fantasia when it comes to your psychodysplasia
    because if I could get rid of your flawed rememberings
    and dredge back up all those
    awful things

    gods know
    in a second
    in a heartbeat
    in the blink of a hellion's eye
    I would sing
    a poison lullabye
    lulling your sins to sleep
    with Medea's mead
    and the tears the Fates weep

    Moira ain't got a damn thing on me
    when it comes to damaging successfully

    this is my

    and as good old Ingrid said
    if I have to incinerate
    to emerge
    that's the only fire
    I let run free
    because it is
    a part of me

    Moira ain't got a damn thing on me
    Icarus alone matches my lust for the sky
    and Medea feels my fate to be free
    so listen as I sing my medean lullabye....

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