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    dots Submission Name: I love you too, IIdots
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    Author: esterhzys
    ASL Info:    35/F/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    2.9 - 48/47/44
    Words: 219
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsI love you too, IIdots
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    The feeling I get when you are looking at me
    Your blue eyes smiling
    I feel your soul blending into mine
    Even if we are not even touching
    Then the feeling that fills me when I wrap my arms around you and you holding me tight
    Innocent as a baby loves his mama

    I'm so afraid
    Can I? Should I? Just for a moment let you in?
    When I feel your touch still now
    That should tell you … but you refuse to see it.. so you want to be told..
    Anyone can say it in words but feeling it comes from the heart…
    You leave me breathless

    I don't know what love really is
    Neither of us ever learned
    How you could punch me? Smack me down and push me away and shut me out?
    Told me you never never never can be my friend.
    I hurt everyday
    Think of your hurtful words everyday
    So sad
    So broken
    So torn apart
    I wish you could be dead to me but I cannot let go
    I really need to be with you, talk to you, hold you
    I want to tell you I love you too
    I've always loved you
    I still do
    And I'm hurting so bad that you are gone




    Submitted on 2010-08-15 18:30:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Heart wrenching to read, I've obsessed over this type of love. It is so damaging to the heart if you hold on to it. Sometimes the gift of love can hold us in bondage, the only way to free yourself, is to let it go.

    Love of Christ,
    Christie
    | Posted on 2010-08-15 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]


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