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    dots Submission Name: How Many?dots
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    Author: bigohhh1
    ASL Info:    31/M/Fl
    Elite Ratio:    3.35 - 25/21/37
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsHow Many?dots
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    How many?
    How many days, weeks, years?
    How many will go by before the pain goes away?
    How many will be hurt by trying to get close to me?
    Only to find out that I only let one person in my whole life that close.
    How many Summers will pass until I forget?
    How many Sunsets will fall before I stop thinking about watching it set with you?
    How many Winters will pass before I forget sleeping in My car with the heater on with you, in that parking lot?
    How many?
    How many people will get close to you only to have you turn on them too?
    How many people will deny we told them so?
    How many Sunflowers will we see before we forget the significance of the ones in yours eyes?
    How many times will you try to forget me?
    How many times will we pray for the pain and anger and despair to leave?
    How? Many?




    Submitted on 2010-08-16 12:37:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thanks for reminding me.. I don't think any form of true love can really end. You'll be left with these scars until you die. My advice, take them in stride. Be a stronger person for you're suffering. Don't ever let someone break you.
    | Posted on 2010-08-18 00:00:00 | by MyWorld | [ Reply to This ]


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