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Author: bigohhh1
ASL Info:    31/M/Fl
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Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Nomore does he feel it or trust it
Nor does he believe in it
The Warrior has faught long

And the Great Spirit
Has been kind
And shown the way too many times to care
The warrior no longer wishes to forge ahead

He knows the contact they had was special
That they both had just fallen asleep
And awoke
And Slept again
Only to find There was no such fight left
Not with eachother
Marla has gone
Her heart set on the Saint
The Warrior's last walk
The Warriors last battle
A Long one.

He knows now many things he did not before
Truth is more important than sentiment
or intention, No
He needs no more
He thanks the Spirit every day and night
for the opportunity, but really he hurts too much

This battle has taken its toll
And he is ready to go home
"Ahhhh that is a tricky task" says his Master
The Warrior knows you may not leave Battle Honorably
Except in One instance

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