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inception and conception

Author: bigohhh1
ASL Info:    31/M/Fl
Elite Ratio:    3.35 - 25 /21 /37
Words: 105
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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inception and conception

Since inception and conception
deal with the origination
I will deal with the origination
I wil not rush out
Not on either
Not some expansion
Of an otherwise unworthy systematic
undoing of everything
where no inception or conception
make sense
You can listen to whispers
all by your Selves
It began way too quick
I a sloppy hurry
And so it will end that way too
Guess maybe my concepts are flawed
And no one is around
Cast me out?
Then run I must.
way past that field....
I am positive I should.
Nice to know you

Submitted on 2010-08-16 13:07:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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