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    dots Submission Name: Marijuanadots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 549
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 836



    Description:
       Weed :) Not my best but feedback would be nice


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    dotsMarijuanadots
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    Spark it up
    Drink it down
    Get so high
    You forget how to frown

    Grab a friend
    Maybe two or three
    Laughing hysterically
    Lovin' smoking these trees

    Blunt, joint, bong, or pipe
    Doesn't really matter how
    Just a couple puffs
    And your head will be saying "wow"

    Marijuana, pot, Mary Jane
    The wonderful mistress
    One bowl or two
    And you'll forget why you stress

    Been doin' this since I was 13
    And it never grows old
    Call me what you please
    But until you try it, don't be so bold

    I'll roll it up
    It's not too tough
    Here you go
    Go ahead a take a puff....









    Submitted on 2010-08-16 21:55:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I just recently quit smoking. Not really by choice, I'm joining the military. Think of me next time you smoke one. :P
    | Posted on 2010-08-18 00:00:00 | by MyWorld | [ Reply to This ]


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