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    dots Submission Name: My Pastdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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       5am get to work both jobs today from 4pm to 7am Wed Morning and can't sleep .... WHAT A SUPRISE


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    dotsMy Pastdots
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    I wish to have a time machine
    or a magical eraser

    smudge all the parts of this life I am disgusted with.
    Take back that drug addiction,
    Rewind that moment i pulled the trigger,
    Think longer about turning my step father in for sexual abuse!

    If only I had the ability to wrap these memories in a box,
    toss it out the window the next time on the free way.
    I'd do it in a heart beat...

    OH... how foolish
    a daydreamer I am, at heart.
    All the,
    Should've
    Would've
    Could've

    Pop into my mind at this time of night
    nevertheless
    I'll always long for that time machine and magical eraser




    Submitted on 2010-08-17 04:19:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      If we could go back and change all the experiences that we view as mistakes we may have never arrived at where we are right "now".

    Everything makes us who we are and although we may have regrets there is no going back only what we do with that experience as we move forward.

    Great!

    Enjoy love, peace, joy, abundance & smiles 2 share ;-) ;-) ;-)
    | Posted on 2010-08-18 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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