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    dots Submission Name: just because i love you.dots
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    Author: Mooncatcher
    ASL Info:    20 / F / Australia
    Elite Ratio:    3.85 - 20/37/19
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 508
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       i wrote this too my partner


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    dotsjust because i love you.dots
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    Dear Joshua,

    I love you.

    There are no possible words to describe this feeling.
    I just love you.

    and just by knowing you love me, makes my days better in millions of tiny ways.

    What i love the most...
    Is going to sleep next too you.
    Its when you wrap your arms around me and pull me tight and close.
    This is where i am truly happy.
    This is what i love the most

    Do you know what else.

    I really love the way you kiss me.

    Its that one, slow kiss that we share.
    where everything around us comes to a stop...


    The feeling. the electricity

    That connection that we have.

    Our unspoken love

    That one kiss that we have, everytime says, i love you.

    Because Joshua, I do.

    I just love you.

    alliy.




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