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    Author: weepingwillow
    ASL Info:    23/f/Brighton
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 38/75/35
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    religion is the State
    when You are Caste(igated)
    BURNED ALIVE
    religion is the weed to survive

    the men are at war
    children lost to the interplay
    of 'heaven' - meeting Hell.

    in a backstreet,the semen-covered refuse to pray
    in their solitudes, women's empty bellies are not fed by gods enduring light

    Foolish not to see the similarity
    between Religion and Charity
    momentary crutch repeatedly distended and revoked

    to provide is to teach the Truth:to cradle and Love
    Religion is personified by a power that lies above

    Moulded from virtue:the cup runs dry
    Prayer is the mantra that never asks

    why?




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