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    dots Submission Name: Enantio Hydra - Sonnetdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 75/191/246
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
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    dotsEnantio Hydra - Sonnetdots
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    The start where we must depart -- Play lyre;
    sing muse -- Portray the scream - screaming pyre

    Colubrine in nature - Slither -- Slither ---
    Don't tread on me - Spiteful; Said with a hiss.
    A hydra formed of brother of sister -
    Divided to a fault their words meant piss.

    One spoke great words, bold and strong - Republic
    The kingdom of man - a simple guide (sage)
    The 'two' preached better man - Democratic -
    Even if it means controlling - The age

    Divisive; Deceitful they continue -
    stomping on our backs, a phantom ideal
    forever haunting this - Our great venue.
    Never the same our enantio --- Real




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