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    dots Submission Name: The Window Lanedots
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    Author: mtg1988
    ASL Info:    22/m/ca
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 7/1/4
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsThe Window Lanedots
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    Staring back from the window through a pane in vain
    In the bathroom stall of a cross country train
    The window far too thick for a mortal to clear
    ... the bile within, the haunt of a stain.

    The game arises to the forefront in fear
    Creeping effortlessly higher and near
    Marketing the bile as a man's germination;
    He jumped off the car on the rear.

    The glass cracks further with each solution
    More molecules gone in the acidic pollution
    Bile from within and acid without
    Breaking apart with ease this ideal notion.

    Blank stares meet at the start of each bout
    Bringing along an atmosphere in greater clout
    Still the train traverses and mirrors shatter
    Lost in the onslaught of the overhead clatter.




    Submitted on 2010-08-19 17:15:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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