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    dots Submission Name: Sonnet - Flowers For The Girl Made Of Flowersdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsSonnet - Flowers For The Girl Made Of Flowersdots
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    Oh how beautiful she was: Ocean brine
    the color of her eyes; tendrils of gold
    like laurels they parted from the wind - Bine.
    My heart spoke -- Should of done what I was told.




    Submitted on 2010-08-20 20:24:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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