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    dots Submission Name: Temi's life rulesdots

    Author: Temidayo
    ASL Info:    29 male Nigeria-lagos
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 161/40/20
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Rules for living from the life and times of Temidayo

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    dotsTemi's life rulesdots

    Since I know in life,
    one rarely gets to redo or undo
    whats been done
    so always I keep a
    clear head
    and make the rules as I go.

    Stay co-ordinated as often as I can,
    never yielding I discard and adopt plan after plan.

    Work with order and sequence
    after one will come two,
    as a rule be nice preferably
    nasty only if one has to.
    Usually polite and caring,
    always split fairly in sharing.
    As one goes up in life recall more the hugs,less the stabs
    build bonds,
    repay attention,
    keep tabs.

    Stuck to the company of my devices
    many atime am left on my own
    Yeah! Just passing through this world aint my home.

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      we hope for some semblance of order in our lives....often two doesn't come after one like it should, and we just do the best we can...

    but then as your last line says.."i'm just passing through/ the world ain't my home"

    so i'll just make the best of it while i'm here..."when in rome, do what the romans do"

    but when i get to whatever the next level is...i will just be me and that will be good enough.

    i like where you go in your writings...Henry! and i like tagging along for the ride.

    | Posted on 2011-03-27 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      mmm i find this intersting I wish I could do as you do. I try my best to be a good person to be a hard worker to put all I have into what I find meaningfull although I must admit others tend to bring me down those whom do not care to the extent I do for their jobs for their schooling pple who complaining about how they dislike their life's yet aren't willing to take the step to change things. I give you kudo's on the way you live on your intentions and I hope one day... I can do the same wholeheartedly

    | Posted on 2011-01-06 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]

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