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    dots Submission Name: Deliver Us From Thy Leachesdots
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    Author: Evil Jesture
    ASL Info:    22/m/wherever
    Elite Ratio:    3.14 - 165/201/93
    Words: 274
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Satire
    Total Views: 550
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1673



    Description:
       A song written to my ex wife. This was a hit at boothfest this year


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    dotsDeliver Us From Thy Leachesdots
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    Your were my life, my time, my mistake
    I cant believe u ment anything to me

    You were my life, my time, my mistake
    You were nothing more than a leach

    Your time
    Was spent draining me out
    You never gave two shits
    Could never figure what I was about

    You are
    The worlds life sucking whore
    I gave up it all
    And I was left with nothing

    You Leach- is all that you are
    You Leach- I cant belive it
    You Leach- Your the true evil indeed
    I just cant care no more
    I must more on
    Deliver us from thy leach

    Chorus:
    Make your peace and i will my own
    plans for life
    Make your peace and i will my own
    start makin my time
    Make your peace and i will my own
    I will accept my mistake
    Make your peace and i will go on with my
    Delivering myself from thy leach

    Just a mess
    In your face
    a complete evil distress

    Your lips of poinson make me quiver
    You make me fall to the floor
    An all around mistake just go away
    and leave me alone

    My life my time my mistake
    I made more tragedy with your face

    i walk alone and face all thats left
    and ill be on my own
    and deliver from thy leach...

    Chorus

    You leach
    I dont give a fuck anymore
    You leach
    You drained me to the floor
    You leach
    An apostal of the damned

    I cant take it anymore
    Just go away
    And deliver us from thy leaches




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