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Sonnet - Ten Nos
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Sonnet - ten noS, get the parody?
Sonnet - Ten Nos
How irritated you must be - so flush.
No - I will not be your friend, stupid whore
No - I will not spare your feelings - the crush.
No - I will say nothing more - such a bore
No - I do not need the bells and whistles
No - Not obvious - A fucking riddle
No - I'll be waiting in the weeds; thistles
No - My words are sharp; sting like a fiddle
No - Focus on the water - not the fall.
No - Decadent drowning in your critique
"No - Makes little sense if any at all."
"How coy of me you're the writers physique."
My ego will lead me to a damn hearse,
yet I see fortune in quite the reverse
Submitted on 2010-08-22 15:26:57
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