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    dots Submission Name: Sonnet - Ten Nosdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 75/191/246
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
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       Sonnet - ten noS, get the parody?


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    dotsSonnet - Ten Nosdots
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    How irritated you must be - so flush.
    No - I will not be your friend, stupid whore
    No - I will not spare your feelings - the crush.
    No - I will say nothing more - such a bore

    No - I do not need the bells and whistles
    No - Not obvious - A fucking riddle
    No - I'll be waiting in the weeds; thistles
    No - My words are sharp; sting like a fiddle

    No - Focus on the water - not the fall.
    No - Decadent drowning in your critique
    "No - Makes little sense if any at all."
    "How coy of me you're the writers physique."

    My ego will lead me to a damn hearse,
    yet I see fortune in quite the reverse




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