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    dots Submission Name: Walk of Lifedots

    Author: refman869
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    dotsWalk of Lifedots

    Paths will meet
    Paths will diverge,
    Paths will run together
    Only to break apart
    Despite one's best care,
    A path will never hold true,
    And one will stray....

    But stay on as much as possible,
    Try to not make mistakes,
    Forgive yourself,
    Ask others for forgiveness
    When making any mistakes.

    One does not rest
    Until the path is finished,
    But no path is ever fully trodden
    By any who walk down it.

    Do not follow another's path,
    It is their adventure,
    Not for others to mimic.

    We each have a different path,
    And must try to understand the journey.

    Submitted on 2010-08-22 17:08:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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