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Submission Name: the truth about the birds and bees (for me) dots

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Author:	PoeticNonsense
ASL Info:	20/f/around
Elite Ratio:	3.82 - 205/215/100
Words:	11

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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drunk when i submitted this.
hope you like it.
not too torn up if you don't.
just remember that one person.
the one.
that's all i can ask.

the truth about the birds and bees (for me) dots

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my monday morning
tylenol and orange juice
making love to you

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.