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    dots Submission Name: the truth about the birds and bees (for me)dots
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    Author: PoeticNonsense
    ASL Info:    20/f/around
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 205/215/100
    Words: 11
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 496
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 75



    Description:
       drunk when i submitted this.
    hope you like it.
    not too torn up if you don't.
    just remember that one person.
    the one.
    that's all i can ask.


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    dotsthe truth about the birds and bees (for me)dots
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    my monday morning
    tylenol and orange juice
    making love to you




    Submitted on 2010-08-23 23:06:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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