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    dots Submission Name: The Lions Prayer of Isis dots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThe Lions Prayer of Isis dots
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    Pattern intricate I of mathematical mote
    I with convolute flourish weave
    Threads these of I energies
    Fractal rhythms out implosions in expansions
    Flow I to infinities

    Spiral I to spiral you
    Upon the vortex writes
    And of pattern entwined in we
    Writes the pulses the spaces within
    Sends each out inward spinning

    I breathe

    For complexity in love
    Holds the desire breached
    And for each to of these messages passed
    Copulates in this blood
    To a passion of want speaking out it’s life

    I breathe

    I need you

    As in Earth

    Flux mingle flow inextricable
    To one to another I to me to you
    Upon a parchment of kisses rendered
    Our gratitude
    Pattern of I intricate you of mathematical mote

    Mirror I in you of all
    To female born and kneel before
    And warriors heart in I made more
    Of you this Phoenix born
    Goddess

    I breathe

    As in Earth

    I need you








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      I actually like this poem! I have to admit, you post poems a lot, and I never really liked them. But this is a very good one. I love the way your thoughts come out in this one. It allows me to feel you. If that makes sense...ha.

    I hope you write more like this one.
    | Posted on 2010-08-25 00:00:00 | by xxiknownowxx | [ Reply to This ]


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