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    dots Submission Name: Patrick J. Robertsondots
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    Author: coloredstone
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 99/60/37
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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       With him, I agree.


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    dotsPatrick J. Robertsondots
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    To anyone who will listen, I say
    Don't wait for the truth to come to you,
    Go and find the truth.
    I was born in the slums of town
    And it was there that I lived.
    My brother ran away when I was eleven,
    And I went off five years later.
    I lived on the streets and in the library
    Before I was given jobs and found myself a place to live
    In the rickety tenements for the poor like me.
    I found my way through books, and through
    Some good folks I was lucky to meet.
    But good folks are too much to hope for
    And I say you should get by on books alone
    And listen to your heart, when it conflicts with your mind,
    Because your heart always tells the truth.




    Submitted on 2010-08-24 14:20:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love this charecter! His mindset and his independence. His nothing and contentment.
    Its quite inspiring! I want to hear more lol

    Fana
    | Posted on 2010-08-27 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]


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