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    dots Submission Name: Lifedots
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    Author: JessMar
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Just a little something i came up with when contemplating the essential description of what life is.


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    dotsLifedots
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    life is a picture
    it flows in its own essence
    it lies with its own passion
    it decieves in its own michevious ways

    life is a journey
    it places you in situations unknown
    it hurts you in places you never knew
    it opens your eyes to a world terribly misunderstood

    life is life
    there's nothing to it
    just one persons path crossing many more
    just one persons ideas changing them all

    Life is whatever you make it.




    Submitted on 2010-08-24 17:57:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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