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    Author: ShadowsofSonya
    ASL Info:    22/female/Arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 300/260/52
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Misc/What you did
    Total Views: 423
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       I have lived through more than I would ever wish upon anyone. This monster is locked up both in prison and in my mind. Time forgives but hearts never forget.


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    Falling through the night. Tomorrow please shed some light. I yearn for love. Too scared of that weightless dove. You have pained me. Made it hard to trust. Difficult to breath. So much has went on. I keep trying... Keep failing... Weakening but strong. Crying most nights. Too afraid to even trust whats right. You are locked away in your empty shell. Even after you get out I will still live in this hell. You changed my life. You are still the reason I cry.




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