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    dots Submission Name: What i Feardots
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    Author: KindredSpirit
    ASL Info:    20, Male, Burlington Iowa
    Elite Ratio:    2 - 54/139/173
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsWhat i Feardots
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    If her presence would to disappear.
    I would die, this I fear.
    If she were to never say those words again.
    I would die.... In sin.
    If I could never hear her speak.
    Then my world would grow weak.
    If I could never feel her embrace.
    Then my soul would vanish without a trace.
    Thinking of you brings a single tear.
    Losing you... Is what I fear.




    Submitted on 2010-08-26 19:13:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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