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    dots Submission Name: Alchemy ofdots

    Author: Mr.Ordinary
    ASL Info:    21/M/Navy
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 64/102/41
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 758
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    dotsAlchemy ofdots

    A dash of this
    And a spoonful of that
    A crocodile toe
    And the wing of a bat

    We are all looking
    For that secret recipe
    That special thing
    Its true, even me

    A cup of sugar
    And a pinch of pepper
    A frog leg
    And skin of leper

    I searched everywhere
    That I thought too
    From the Taj Mahal
    To Timbuktu

    A pint of milk
    A sprits of lime juice
    Spider eggs
    And the eye of a moose

    Everywhere I looked
    I found nothing
    But I did go home
    With an extra something

    A quarter gallon of water
    And some egg whites
    A lizards tail
    And some dust mites

    Souvenirs from around the world
    Quite a few for just one man
    But that doesnt mean there isnt
    Still time for true loves plan

    Submitted on 2010-08-27 05:54:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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