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Author: Roula
ASL Info:    18/female
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Inside your body
you try to rise.
Your heart is floating up
as you are falling


The air you breathe is
hot & thick with dust.
You feel it in your throat;
it can't be swallowed.

Your lungs are like balloons
thirsting for helium
so they too may float
beside your heart.

Your stomach starves
and yet nothing can fill it.
It too, yearns to float.

Yet your body can't seem to let go.

Submitted on 2010-08-27 14:32:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Yikes! This sounds like falling into hell! It is drammatic and emotionally charged, and emotions are what poetry is all about!

Nice work.

| Posted on 2010-08-29 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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