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    dots Submission Name: The Beauty ( Tiphareth )dots
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    Author: col13x
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    Words: 465
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    dotsThe Beauty ( Tiphareth )dots
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    Around the lighted circle
    The dapple shadow shifts my soul
    Sometimes dancing in the bright beams
    Sometimes lost within the pall
    Catching a glimpse of wonder
    Between the nightmare of it all

    And as I stare into the darkness
    As I stare into the light
    See the fire of my love there
    See the lost and lonely night
    And I feel the beast arising through these passions of my blood
    As I see the gentle angel blesses me with a single touch

    And I am digging in the swamp
    I am shovelling in my grave
    As I am standing on the brink
    With the giant leap of faith
    I am looking to my children
    With the future so ensured
    And wonder where my life went and what it all was for

    Around the lighted circle
    The dappled shadow sweeps into my soul
    Dancing in the throes of love
    And weeping from where I do not know
    Broken on the backbone of my sorrow
    Yet swept into the beauty of it all

    And as fire with grit the anger
    Beats injustice to my wall
    The bloody firing squads of murder
    Who’s by bullet we all fall
    I reach and touch the ground
    I am falling to the ground
    The sacred, blessed ground

    While through the music ballet whispers
    The sweetness held into my chest
    And forever the gratitude rocks me
    In a cradle of tenderness
    But inside the waves that sound
    Speaks a storm that wells inside
    With an anguish so profound
    And the vengeance it will ride

    Am I sleeping in the shadow
    Sleeping in the shafts of light
    Playing hide and seek with being
    Pretending I cannot see, that none of this is me
    Cover my eyes so carefully
    Like a child who disappears
    Within the blinking of an eye

    So was I born into this I am going to die
    Or was I eternal from the onset
    Is this all the truth or just another lie
    And as I hang here in this silence
    A ready noose about my neck
    Still touch upon all the answers
    I never would forget

    I hold here in my palm
    Everything you always were and are

    Around the lighted circle
    These wistful shadows trip onto my soul
    Dancing with hesitation in the eternal realms of love
    Drawn between the darkness
    And held into the light
    Neither seeing nor believing
    Which does by that stand condemned
    All of it in the end
    You and me
    Will be
    In the end

    And weeping from where I do not know
    Broken on the backbone of my sorrow
    Yet swept into the beauty
    The beauty
    Of it all








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