First off I like it, no doubt.Not bad at all for a Triple 4 stack.(Four line stanzas.One at the begininng, middle and closing end.)
You've basically done it again J.You put those emotions out with this.I interpret it this way.Your saying there is no more time for a guessing game of who's Mr.Right.Then at the same time theres this thin line between avoiding getting hurt, disappointed and disappointed.And wanting to be right about someone this time around.So really this is [censored] good based on you walking away from your thoughts of having doubts about something/a relationship you feel is the best for you right now.That's how I took it for the read.Only one line confuses me.
"Or shall we pick up the pace!"
This sounds like your kinda pissed asking a question that's really not one at all.Try this
"Or shall we pick up the pace!?"
That way I can tell you have emotion in this question rather than it sounding like you blurting out.It's just a minor error.Good [censored] here J
Bravo!.. I absolutely love this! The raw emotion put forth is astounding. Relationships I believe are one of the hardest parts of life. Finding that certain someone that makes you whole is always a game that we all play until we meet our maker. Though the hardest thing about it is, is wondering if the one you found is the actual "one." I ask myself some of the same things you've posted here. This is like my inner term oil brought to life. Thanks for sharing!