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    dots Submission Name: Trapped Emotionsdots
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    Author: ares_nuke_1
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 106/151/76
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       one of those things that comes to you in the middle of the night when you can't sleep. I hope maybe there is some truth in here for others. Let me tell you it's been true for me. Lack of confidence is no way to live. If you got some walls that you built around yourself that's preventing others from coming in. You'll end up all alone and depressed....Trust me, read my earlier work and you'll see where it got me. Anyways enjoy the poem.


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    dotsTrapped Emotionsdots
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    -I can't take living this way
    -Overloaded with thoughts, all dissarray
    -Emotions brewing, but trapped in a cage
    -Fear that nothing will ever go my way

    -I watch the world crumble to the ground
    -I'm well aware, but make no sound
    -Lost forever, I don't want to be found
    -So I hide behind these bars to which I'm bound




    Submitted on 2010-08-29 20:08:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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