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    dots Submission Name: I Wish We’ve Never Metdots
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    Author: Yousef
    ASL Info:    26/M/Egypt
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 468/203/22
    Words: 364
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
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    I was having a long walk in a road full of trees, watching the wind blowing and the leafs falling in front of me, trying desperately to forget about you, to forget your enchanting voice, your sweet smile and your gentle touch, but forgetting you is like forgetting someone you have never met! It’s practically impossible and I’m hearing a voice in my head saying; don’t mourn forever… She’s not coming back!

    I closed my eyes and there you are standing; your innocent eyes staring, your hands reaching and your lips calling for me.

    You put your hands in mine and we walk along the road, not knowing where we are heading and whether there’s an end to that road! I no longer care about tomorrow as long as you here with me now; I will just keep enjoying this moment as long as I can, hoping, dreaming and praying that this moment, this perfect moment could last forever somehow. You are like a symphony, a melody where two souls meet, a fascinating lyrics written with every heart beat.

    I opened my eyes and all I saw was an empty road, an endless path which I have to walk alone! And now I just can’t close my eyes anymore, because every time I’ll close my eyes all I’ll see is you… I wish I never loved you… I wish we have never met.

    Yousef Hani
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    But I, being poor, have only my dreams; I have spread my dreams under your feet; Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.
    William Butler Yeats




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