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    dots Submission Name: Vagabond Said Don't Mutter A Single Word In Hdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 75/186/232
    Words: 471
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsVagabond Said Don't Mutter A Single Word In Hdots
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    The Vagabond Said Don't Mutter A Single Word In Hell



    The line has been drawn
    As a matter of fact it was dug about waist high
    In accordance with your fear-
    A simple mistake, you told me everything which was dear-
    And I... Walk through the shadows of Kingdom Come
    The strings that bind sin to man have come undone
    Now whisper to her a lullaby - Sweet nothings and everything will be fine.
    - I am the vagabond who pays no fare
    You'll see me on the dark tar mac, smile on my face and a pack on my back
    - I am the vagabond
    You'll do what I tell
    - Don't mutter a single word in Hell

    A simple banter - An exchange

    Will it be hot in there?
    - I just can't say, but I suppose
    Will I ever be found here?
    - I highly doubt it, here lie here
    Will this be the place I die?
    - Yes sir, this is your new home - enjoy your time
    Will I be alright?
    - Hell no, you won't make it through the night
    Why am I feeling this way?
    - I barely Chloroformed your face

    And I... Was the drifter who was never there
    The mirage you seen everywhere
    Looming guilt as you passed me by
    A voice in your head sympathized
    One good deed can change your life
    I applaud you - I really do
    Three is more than company - Trinity
    Soon to be judged - Not by me, but he

    The stage has been set
    As my opinion, I thought it went rather well - My actors come and take a bow
    An acquaintance to your fear
    A single gesture of good faith - I send you to Hell, my gift to take
    And I... Search for an answer in the Sun
    The gift of God is in the mind, a blinding light
    Now think of the fork in the road - Would you turn back if she was gone.
    - I am the vagabond who wanders in search of divine
    You should of listened to her fears - Now sit in silence and drown in tears
    - I am the vagabond
    You should of kept to yourself
    - Don't mutter a single word in Hell

    A few more questions - please proceed

    Will I see the dawn next day?
    - Not unless the rain washes you away
    Will I ever hear my name?
    - Deep in the ground you'll hear no sound
    Will you let her know that I-
    - She already knows, shes buried in the next hole---





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