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I'm so tired of school already... college has lost its appeal and it's only the second frickin' week... ay....
The highlight of my day is coming here and sifting through writing and the Digg Mashup.
I'm up in the morning
Preparing for a day I know will be boring
In the car
Headin' to school
Studyin' what I hate 'cuz it's so frickin' uncool
I'm in class
Writin' stuff down
Filled with useless junk I think I'm gonna drown
For all this time
When is it my turn, to time to shine?
I'm headin' home
Wanting anything just to be alone
I get into bed
No more day please I'd rather just be dead
Submitted on 2010-09-02 10:58:05
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God I know what you mean
life feels like a freakin loop
everyday is just another day
Why try to abstract or dramatize it?
Just write it out
that's what you did, easier said than done
I guess wr should all just sieze the day
or carpe diem as much would prefer it
carpe diem laylaviolet
| Posted on 2010-09-07 00:00:00 | by
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i have 2 say this vent kinda made me laught :>
in a silly manner... yaa - 2 think that school can be tensions of cruelty..
work work work [act like yr playing] then back to work...
i do love the humor in the poem...
| Posted on 2010-09-03 00:00:00 | by
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