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    Author: LaylaViolet
    ASL Info:    17/Female
    Elite Ratio:    3.57 - 18/16/18
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 346
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       I'm so tired of school already... college has lost its appeal and it's only the second frickin' week... ay....
    The highlight of my day is coming here and sifting through writing and the Digg Mashup.


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    Sun rises
    I'm up in the morning
    Preparing for a day I know will be boring

    In the car
    Headin' to school
    Studyin' what I hate 'cuz it's so frickin' uncool

    I'm in class
    Writin' stuff down
    Filled with useless junk I think I'm gonna drown

    Too slow
    For all this time
    When is it my turn, to time to shine?

    School's out
    I'm headin' home
    Wanting anything just to be alone

    Sun sets
    I get into bed
    No more day please I'd rather just be dead




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      God I know what you mean

    life feels like a freakin loop
    everyday is just another day

    Why try to abstract or dramatize it?
    Just write it out
    that's what you did, easier said than done

    I guess wr should all just sieze the day
    or carpe diem as much would prefer it

    carpe diem laylaviolet
    | Posted on 2010-09-07 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]
      Laylaviolet...

    i have 2 say this vent kinda made me laught :>
    in a silly manner... yaa - 2 think that school can be tensions of cruelty..

    work work work [act like yr playing] then back to work...

    ~Robbie

    i do love the humor in the poem...
    | Posted on 2010-09-03 00:00:00 | by Bloodstone | [ Reply to This ]


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