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    dots Submission Name: I Kept This From Youdots
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    Author: EileenToTheLeft
    ASL Info:    28/f/va
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 16/36/55
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI Kept This From Youdots
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    Juicer caged between my ribs,
    turns to pulp the fruit you give.
    Surely, this should quench a thirst.
    But, it never settles in.

    Mother said, Father said,
    there was shining gold inside this chest.
    They dug for years in fool's belief,
    though, never found an ounce of it.




    Submitted on 2010-09-02 22:14:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i can never quench my thirst for love or achievement...and though mother and father said there was gold in me...no lover has ever found it...i have kept it hidden...and fooled many a man...
    and maybe myself because i never accepted love from others.

    i am surprised there is no response to this...

    like it quite well...nice metaphor.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-07-08 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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