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    dots Submission Name: Found my love...dots
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    Author: MrBear
    ASL Info:    19/M/Ga
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 59/109/48
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 536
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    dotsFound my love...dots
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    i woke up when i found my love,
    all and all it was just a dream,
    a secret message from the heavens above,
    a sneak peek, of things to be.

    i woke up when i found my love,
    where was she? in my past, i think,
    you know that dreams are never really clear...
    6AM, try to piece the missing link.

    i woke up when i found my love,
    first I had to reconcile with my dad,
    i don't know if this is true to reality,
    but i miss him, god must know that

    i woke up when i found my love,
    i was running, having so much fun,
    she was running, and i knew to chase her,
    instinct, i already miss her.

    i'll go to sleep when i find my dream

    ~Teddy Dayton~




    Submitted on 2010-09-03 08:14:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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