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Author: blankscreen
ASL Info:    22/f/NY
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He wanted me to write a happy poem about him...I tried.


I can't stop smiling
Jolts from head to toe
Shivers down my spine
I won't just let this go

I can't believe it happened
Simpler than I'd thought
I'm holding on tight
Because our love can't just be forgot

I fell head first
And I don't want to get back up
Being close to you means safety
Sweet strength and love

I could reach up to the sky
And not sleep for months
I could eat a grocery store
And climb a million stairs

I could catch the stars
Smile straight in to the sun
Because you are back in my life
I don't know how I ever went wrong

You are perfection
Bottled up in an angel
Glimpses shine forth in your smile
Ear to ear its like heaven

Your hands which hold me
Tell stories of laughter
Your glance
Can lift a cloud from rain

You are forever
Come to save me from myself
You are everything I was missing
For as long as I can remember

You wanted a happy poem
I don't know how well it went
I just wanted to tell you I love you
Finally things make sense.

Submitted on 2010-09-03 08:19:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I am glad that after eating a grocery store you had the sense to climb a million stairs!
It sounds to me like you have it bad!
Lucky for you bad is good at least for now.
Anyway this is an old post so I wonder how
is that love thing holding up? I sure hope that when I get in my time machine love will still be rocking your
when I end up!
| Posted on 2012-10-07 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]

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